So Tell me, is it just me?

By BetaWolfinVA

Truth be told
I love you still
What is this
a fucking reel?
.
look at you
I love it still
performance
that's where I'm ill
.
reaching you
i can't get by
no matter
how hard i try
.
solo play
still works i say
playing with
you lacks, just why?
.
Mel Type Two
Diabetes
Making me
medically ill
.
but i'm more
slave of old love
dreaming her
failing with you
.
but your size
Doth share the blame
beautiful
so hard to reach
.
Were I an
Inch longer man
Would we have
Had problems still?

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Copyright 2013 HHMCameron
Published on Sunday, March 17, 2013.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Graphic Art"

Author's Note:

I probably won't leave this one up very long, or maybe will take the picture down... dunno... per advice, picture down... i do love the way she looks still...
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  • A former member wrote: Great job! very vivid And well written!

  • BetaWolfinVA On Sunday, March 31, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    glad that you liked it :) Scholar

  • dwells On Sunday, March 17, 2013, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Hey HH! - suggest you read "Banana Hammock" that I wrote about a year ago and put youself at ease. We can't all be Studly Hungwells, and much is between the ears too you know? Cheers!

  • BetaWolfinVA On Monday, March 18, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    couch is lonely, bed would be frusrating and lonely... Scholar

  • soul_versing On Sunday, March 17, 2013, soul_versing (883)By person wrote:

    This is so clever.. I love it.. Scholar

  • BetaWolfinVA On Sunday, March 17, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    thank you :) slightly stunned, but glad that u liked it :) Scholar

  • soul_versing On Sunday, March 17, 2013, soul_versing (883)By person wrote:

    No need to be stunned, your an excellent writer. : ) Scholar

  • BetaWolfinVA On Monday, March 18, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    thank you very much :) Scholar

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