Unkept ( remastered)

By Stephanie Sideways

In attempt to stop her stashes in any fitting crevice
A thousand telling tones, lost with bravado through eyelashes
Battered, head bowed to deflect all adult menace
a message missing target, in attempt to stop her stashes

Must just love the sound of flapping tongue lashes
What befitting impetus would set a pride in place
Grooves are wearing thin , needle sparks and flashes

barricade the flood land and she will drown in her misplace
Build a tide of tidy-less, forego the constant clashes
Would she bale a sinking ship and welcome her new found space?
A message missing target, in attempt to stop her stashes

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Published on Thursday, February 21, 2013. Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

The rhyming scheme is better understood if a roundel now, so I edited accordingly . Gosh everyday really is a school day!

Comments on "Unkept ( remastered)"

On Thursday, February 21, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795) wrote:

ive encountered two like this, one was the mother of my first GF, and the other one was my first wife. :::shudder:::
On Friday, February 22, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

Hi btw :-) thanks for reading HHMCameron!
On Friday, February 22, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

How they live like it , I don't know . I am not obsessively clean and tidy but Jeeeeeez
On Friday, February 22, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795) wrote:

i dont understand it at all... any one that makes *me* look like a neat freak is very bad off.. LOL
On Thursday, February 21, 2013, dwells (4285) wrote:

Stashes still seems almost too enigmatic without another clue, unless she's a pack rat maybe or just a hoarder? Still pondering...
On Thursday, February 21, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

She is just annoyingly messy! Shoves stuff every/ anywhere others than where it lives.
On Thursday, February 21, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

( Of not if. )Well dwells. It's quite an interesting format eh. Quite disciplined. X x