Pinocchia

By Candy Hart

 I fall down deeper and try to right myself
But I'm left handed; two feet of the same kind.

And I begin to wonder if my maker

did me in a hurry

and messed up little things
that I should need.

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Copyright 2012 Candy Hart
Published on Sunday, November 18, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Alchemist On Friday, January 18, 2013, Alchemist (860)By person wrote:

    This sounds like a monologue and I love everything about it. Great write

  • vampire_queen666 On Monday, November 19, 2012, vampire_queen666 (141)By person wrote:

    this one's really cute in some sort of way, but at the same time a bit sad. we all have imperfections

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, November 18, 2012, FadedBlues (2938)By person wrote:

    ...we are designed w/imperfections, the challenge is to overcome them...

  • dwells On Sunday, November 18, 2012, dwells (5703)By person wrote:

    If this concept was you own then it was beyond perfect, cheers!

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