I made him BLEED

By vampire_queen666

Blasphemous screams echoe through the skies
Anathemas rise when my antagonist dies
Beautiful slaughter congeals in his doom
His corpse lays lifeless in this blood-drenched room

His persecution led to morbid shrieks
his ghost will be where the sinner seeks
this hatred he gave me, I grew hellish wings
to his suffering being I whispered dreadful things

His deeds made me spiteful they made me insane
And i'd gladly laugh when I'm his fatal bane
I'm shrouded in darkness, a being of grim
I unleashed my rage at this false seraphim

Into the abyss where dragons sleep
Into the abyss which is so deep
I tore him and the beasts, they tore him asunder
I slowly grinned when he was stricken by thunder

Prophecies come unfulfilled
Yet I had never any guilt
I only felt happy, from the curse I was freed
I only felt happy, I made him bleed

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Copyright 2012 vampire_queen666
Published on Friday, November 16, 2012.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I'd love to do this to my father... this poem is the personification for my hatred
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  • A former member wrote: "Revenge is a dish best served cold".. Your poem says it without regret, without fear.. And I like very much the way you made it real here.. Very good writting! :)

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Thursday, January 2, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium (304)By person wrote:

    What a way to fantasize revenge. Wonderful write :)

  • A former member wrote: So amazingly terrible. Flowed well. a look in the mind of a killer. I liked this one lots ^w^

  • Despair On Thursday, August 1, 2013, Despair (37)By person wrote:

    So beautifully horrific. It flows quite nicely. Well done.

  • A former member wrote: damn you're good! I love this I have the same feelings towards a few people in my life as well do to what they have done to me..Keep writing you are great

  • A former member wrote: Impressive. Such anger, a pain I can relate to. This is very well penned.

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, January 5, 2013, PoetessDarkly (772)By person wrote:

    wicked poem, and your pieces is lovely dark and sinister.

  • A former member wrote: Great anger and hatred. Rage...loved it.

  • A former member wrote: You my dear are exactly my kind of poet! nothing more explosive than unbridled rage! 10/10!

  • BetaWolfinVA On Friday, November 23, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (824)By person wrote:

    do not let him destroy you. living well best revenge Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Beautifully deep. My curiosity may get the best of me, but as your saying you'd love to do this as your father, he must have royally angered you off to create so much raw hatred. I want more of this wonderful, raw, poetry. As Symbol (1633) said, encore. Scholar

  • matteus On Friday, November 16, 2012, matteus (29)By person wrote:

    wow such raw power very pleasurable to read:)

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