Rose
By violetdarkness
my love,
look above
do you see the sky?
as clear
as your face
in this cold foggy night
look how big,
how great
how vast
then ask me my love
what's
it all about
and i'll take a hit
from this marlboro
lights
release a thick smoke
in the air,
until
it's gone
a moment of silence...
my
love,
that sky you're staring
is like my love
it's big, it's vast
pure as a white dove
and
the moon that hangs
is my desire
to keep you safeĀ
to keep you loved
this night,
i'll be your
coat
like bonfires in beaches
to keep you warm
and keep
the fire burning
while lovely birds are singingĀ
a
melody
of perfection
affection,
isn't the
right word
i scribble through my notes
to find the right
answer
to fill in the blank
to encirle the choice
but there aren't no clues
and so,
i'll leave
the question
unanswered
because no words can express
why i fell in love
with you
my lovely rose.
Author's Note:
for her.Comments on "Rose"
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On Sunday, June 17, 2012, FadedBlues
(2172) wrote:
...nice, love is a primary force behind poetry...
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A former member wrote:
She+s lucky...blessed. Amazing poem, loved it.
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On Sunday, June 17, 2012, violetdarkness
(50) wrote:
thank you :) i am indeed the lucky one to have someone very special to write a poem about. she's the reason why my pen moves :)
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A former member wrote:
it's .. i don't have a word for it. she is a very lucky girl to have such a warm and tender heart to love her.