Poet and Painter

By lupus tenebrae

 



I stared then , for the longest hour yet
before my headlights uttered,
“You’re a blank vinaigrette”.

Colourless, prism-lit acidity,
the jet black lotus, contrasts
your transparent skin, deep

As it had fallen into drowning pools,
where our time should have ended,
at the cemetery 

And yet, oddly, I felt alive that day,
when your visors met with mine,
irises, matching thanks

Between one way windows, upon their sills,
a poet, and a painter,
could have been something more.

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, June 6, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Sometimes, it's just not meant to be, no matter how perfect you are together. Written in a series of kimo.
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  • Sin On Friday, November 22, 2013, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    I found this clever and delightful. I enjoyed the paned view you painted. ~k

  • Lux On Sunday, August 25, 2013, Lux (299)By person wrote:

    I would have been the poet. Mixing colors while he waited, strumming words along for my next piece. Piercing me with things I could never see, and then more. He objects to my color mixing, saying I've made a mess of his pallet, I have no retaliation, for his words breathe life into my ink. This reminded me of a kimono. Drenched silk, flowing ivory and gold.

  • blue On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    heh, you got that right man.

  • dwells On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Well-pondered thoughts and much maturity shown in the knowing that indeed, some ships just pass in the night.

  • A former member wrote: very nice piece its a great read thanks for sharing

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