Empty Words
By lupus tenebrae
All the words are taken,
shaken from the
trees of fall.
Hearts of stone cannot convey,
days into their
sums of art.
Such is night to morning sun
none could have my
empty touch.
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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Author's Note:
Everyone deserves better than this, but on occasion, I can only give 50% as opposed to 100. This is using a style dubbed kinkimirror sestet, by kinkifrog of course.Comments on "Empty Words"
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On Monday, April 30, 2012, dwells
(4288) wrote:
Don't ever believe all the words are taken our your touch will indeed be empty, thanks Wolfie.
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On Saturday, April 28, 2012, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
concise but it has a very heavy impact for its size... i'd say this is more than 50%... a lot of food for thought and heart in this...
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On Saturday, April 28, 2012, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
This all goes back to the saying, "we're not perfect." It's not a saying to me, it's a fact, but even so this is all we can do at times, give 50%. I'll tell you something though, I'd rather 50% than nothing at all, I think that's the true message or should be anyways. Thank you for sharing, my good friend(Wolfy) =)