. . a moment of bliss . .

By NikesRain

 



skies that smell of snow
remind me that his touch holds
the deepest caress of passion
with the lightest elegance


clouds stretching with cool palms
brushing the heavens
the most gentle of fingers
creating a subtle shivering


so deeply intimate
there are no words
it transcends beyond 
any mortal definition



utterly entrancing
enfolded completely
one soul against the other
his hand drifting down my back






 

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Copyright 2012 NikesRain
Published on Thursday, February 9, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Friday, February 10, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...your poems sparkle, not artificially, like diamonds, but like a Van Gogh night full of stars...(whew! I work hard at these comments...)

  • Magdalena On Thursday, February 9, 2012, Magdalena (615)By person wrote:

    Breathtaking imagery and write.

  • dwells On Thursday, February 9, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Gave me shivers to read this, and the smell of snows long-forgotten, thanks.

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