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A Void
By Clydes_Bonnie
I've got a
void, a
void that I
I need to fill
gotta
get that void full
that clock ticks shrill
that clock it kills
Line up those thrills
roll up those bills
press press those
pills
avoid
self esteem had never been so expensive..
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Copyright 2012 Clydes_Bonnie
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On Sunday, January 27, 2019, carlosjackal
(3011)
wrote:
Fun and witty wordplay that rolls off the tongue with ease. Very much enjoyed.
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On Saturday, December 15, 2018, Divine hell
(249) wrote:
I throughly enjoyed this part "gotta get that void full that clock ticks shrill that clock it kills" I like this so much because we as the human race do this to ourselves, we are in pain and we always look for escape from that pain. Thank you for sharing, you're a gifted writer. DH
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A former member wrote:
This is classic dark poetry. I love those. Its brilliant.
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A former member wrote:
yes we can all try to fill that void but half the time there is no satisfaction
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On Sunday, June 17, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(430) wrote:
Great work you have there! Profound and meaningful, you really could choose the right words.
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Undertaker
(32) wrote:
dude deep my friend. Fill those voids, aweful voids....good poem
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On Thursday, March 8, 2012, ladyofsorrow
(17) wrote:
i to agree with alchemist , well said my friend!
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On Wednesday, February 29, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
Yes pills are too damn expensive I agree, I mean why does it cost so much to be happy, I ponder. And I love the quote on your profile about the dirty mirror. Welcome to the Valley.
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, veingo
(532) wrote:
Loving your writing style... So glad you've found your way here. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
Impressive Spill!
Brief and Dynamic
Astounding!
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