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Lies
By celestine_moon
cold eyes
staring hard at nothing
he tosses me a light
bare responses
gather in the dusk
one adding on to
the other, then another
adding up to nothing
going nowhere
a fixed gaze
a set jaw
a closed mind
nothing remains
but his empty
broken promises
Lies Lies Lies
it all adds up
to nothing in the end
and i walk away
disappointed again
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Copyright 2003 celestine_moon
Published on Sunday, July 6, 2003.
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Comments on "Lies"
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, urbanhumility
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wrote:
your prose has given new definiton..............very well done............urban
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On Monday, March 14, 2005, celestine_moon
(46) wrote:
Vel...you were right.
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
Nothing ....every so often turns into everything...Hope remains...great write, Thanx! VelvetT~
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Agrees totaly with Vel (With a little doubt on the positive side) Tiger
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
This was written beautifully... great work. Keep it Up.
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A former member wrote:
Damn, im speachless, perfectly worded, great write.
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