Demons

By Lustfulangel

 Demons
Eyes like stone 
solitary and 
withdrawn, 
emotionless, 
only 
hostility. 

Deranged laughter 
glee at every plunging 
failure. 

Shrieking 
at uneasiness, 
discomposure, 
at tremors of 
dread and doubt. 

Seduced, 
clouds coat the 
sinister gloom. 
No way out.

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Copyright 2011 Lustfulangel
Published on Wednesday, September 14, 2011.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • Ravenblade On Friday, April 5, 2013, Ravenblade (327)By person wrote:

    This was short, and conveyed a point rather well. I hate the feeling of being entrapped in life, just realize, we always have an option B

  • Melancholic VIncent On Friday, June 8, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (534)By person wrote:

    Your own personal demons? Description seems like something you vividly see everyday

  • terris crimson On Thursday, September 15, 2011, terris crimson (207)By person wrote:

    i like it it is very descriptive

  • dwells On Wednesday, September 14, 2011, dwells (5694)By person wrote:

    Very apt description of a few I've encountered through the years, thanks.

  • haunted On Wednesday, September 14, 2011, haunted (1201)By person wrote:

    a pretty good description of life with these things we call demons. great write!

  • Devilish On Wednesday, September 14, 2011, Devilish (3782)By person wrote:

    Seduced, clouds coat the sinister gloom. No way out. Fuckin beautiful!!! Scholar

  • Lustfulangel On Wednesday, September 14, 2011, Lustfulangel (11)By person wrote:

    why thank you

  • Devilish On Wednesday, September 14, 2011, Devilish (3782)By person wrote:

    No thank you! Im thinking, "does one truely know the power of demons?" I wrote something similar called Ok daddy I will. Don't get me wrong "I DONT WHORE MY WORK" Just thought i'd give you my example of demons, unless ur squemish about rape... Scholar

  • Lustfulangel On Wednesday, September 14, 2011, Lustfulangel (11)By person wrote:

    no im not i actually have some poems about that too its just taking me forever to put them up to many to go through

  • Devilish On Wednesday, September 14, 2011, Devilish (3782)By person wrote:

    Well if you want more reading then you have to read others as well... I think you have talent, save some posts for later and read others works and roam around the valley, that's what were here for sweeety!!! Scholar

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