On Common Ground
By Midnight Phoenix
Unique and silent we crept from the heavens
To note that our desires have been stolen
This deepest entity chosen to realize
None shall find solace in hearts so swollen
A lapse in thought, yet time continues onward
Swirling so dizzy until all balance lost
Eyes blurry and body ill on contemplation
In theory there lies a way to make it across
Looking upon eyes I search for a parallel meeting
A meaning for my life, an unmistakable acceptance
Into infinite passion I’m drowning in heaven
As I look up to cry I can feel those reflections
We are unchained so bless us for what we know
Risks spilled on common ground still failing… fading
Into the past where our paths cast us away
For sacred meetings I wait… I’m waiting
So unexplained the life I found and lost
Comments on "On Common Ground"
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On Wednesday, July 23, 2003, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
Ah, this sat very nicely in my mind. It gives me a feeling of want and peace. very nice :)
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On Monday, July 7, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
I may be slow, but eventually I do get around to reading. Intense and profound on many levels, an eloquent read. ~ mw
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On Friday, July 4, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
"None shall find solace in hearts so swollen " great line, Like the piece...Thanx for sharing it.
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A former member wrote:
WOW!!!just wow!
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A former member wrote:
"Into infinite passion I’m drowning in heaven
As I look up to cry I can feel those reflections"- very profound write