Timeless whining.

By sIo

This will be my epitome of egocentric timeless fault.

Together we peace glass
Whoever we encompass
Southbound by the storm
We reiterate to the warmth

Such impatience to define
Will encumber every mind
I don't doubt you feel
What is mine, by deliverance

I remember such a time

Aligned by grace
Defined by instance
Allowance to burn the past
I cannot recall the effort

However this journey
Has come not to a point
Not a stand still
Not an end

But a fault. A flake
A forlorn wake within the tide
I do imagine what may be
As long as this
Is timeless.

With not a thing to remember
Not a judge to initiate
Never the plausible fiend
I endure

That which I am inclined
To destroy

Together I am nothing.

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Copyright 2011 Joanna Smith
Published on Tuesday, August 2, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • WoundsLikeStars On Monday, November 14, 2011, WoundsLikeStars (56)By person wrote:

    I love the feel of this....it's so well written and thought provoking....and it makes me wonder why you haven't posted anything recently? You are a beautiful writer.

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Monday, October 24, 2011, sTr8-jAcKeT (735)By person wrote:

    I personally think this is a very deep & meaningful work. I've felt that way before, wow...

  • A former member wrote: Very good work. Graceful ending as well. Nice style.

  • A former member wrote: 1st stanza is engrossingly good work..each stanza compliments the preceding stanza..awesome flow..nice work! thanks for sharing..

  • Devilish On Wednesday, August 3, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    It never fails when I read you I wonder why I dont pay you more attention... I will from now on. Lovely... Scholar


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