...told . love . listen... (w/ersatzevangelist)

By NikesRain

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If I told you that I loved you for who you are
would you run and hide?
to the mountains of fantastical reflection
covered in a vision not mine


If I told you that I loved you would you laugh or cry?
giddy with rose tinted countenance
as tenderness falls from my eyes



If I told you that I loved you with cut strings and shredded ego
would you still smile?
weaving threads of tomorrow with moonlight
while my heart grins with soft sighs


If I told you that I loved you for your sensibility
would you believe me?
while kissing fairies from the back of a unicorn
spinning senseless in delights and entreats



If I told you that I love you without expectation
would you hold my hand?
with arms thrown wide falling fast from the sun
fingers fitted and laced as writ in timeless sands




If I told you that I loved you simply because you are you
could you deal with that?
entwining the spider webs in the mirror with fireflies
as morning doves blush at my gasp

 


If I told you that you touch me deep within my jagged heart
could you accept it?
with fingers infused with the amber of nirvana
tempered with the ache of a life similarly fit

 


If I told you that I love you would you still be my friend?
skipping endless in daydreams
riding boundless on moonbeams

 

 

 

to the sun

through the stars

 

 

to the sea

through the sky

 

 

 

and back again

yes






but would

you




believe

me?




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Copyright 2011 NikesRain
Published on Friday, June 3, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

all credit goes to Ersa for this one, he started i just rambled between his lines
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  • Devilish On Saturday, August 13, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Absolutely beautiful... My hat goes off to you both!!! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: ahhhh yes, the never ending land of make believe, hehe... what the heart believes, the heart believes..... very thought-provoking and of course, a tender searching out of those bounds where love and friendship meet, dance and become one or the other.... I can see the Doe images in this.... tenderness that is only caught by moonbeams in dragonfly willow-light. *big hugs for the rafter goddess* Scholar

  • pureevil8 On Friday, June 3, 2011, pureevil8 (49)By person wrote:

    Very enchanting and so true. To many times fear negates the truth of love. Thanks for sharing.

  • A former member wrote: oh this is lovely. i hate that fear can stop a love from blooming. very whimsical you two :)

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