...told . love . listen... (w/ersatzevangelist)
By NikesRain
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If I told you that I loved you
for who you are
would you run and hide?
to the mountains of fantastical reflection
covered in a vision not mine
If I told you that I loved you would you laugh
or cry?
giddy with rose tinted countenance
as tenderness falls from my eyes
If I told you that I loved you with cut strings
and shredded ego
would you still smile?
weaving
threads of tomorrow with moonlight
while my heart
grins with soft sighs
If I told you that I loved you for your sensibility
would you believe me?
while kissing
fairies from the back of a unicorn
spinning senseless
in delights and entreats
If
I told you that I love you without expectation
would you hold my
hand?
with arms thrown wide falling fast from the sun
fingers fitted and laced as writ in timeless sands
If I told you that I loved you
simply because you are you
could you deal with that?
entwining the spider webs in the mirror with fireflies
as morning doves blush at my gasp
If I told
you that you touch me deep within my jagged heart
could you accept
it?
with fingers infused with the amber of nirvana
tempered with the ache of a life similarly fit
If I told
you that I love you would you still be my friend?
skipping endless in daydreams
riding
boundless on moonbeams
to the sun
through the stars
to the sea
through the sky
and back again
yes
but would
you
believe
me?
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Author's Note:
all credit goes to Ersa for this one, he started i just rambled between his linesComments on "...told . love . listen... (w/ersatzevangelist)"
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On Saturday, August 13, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Absolutely beautiful... My hat goes off to you both!!!
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A former member wrote:
ahhhh yes, the never ending land of make believe, hehe... what the heart believes, the heart believes..... very thought-provoking and of course, a tender searching out of those bounds where love and friendship meet, dance and become one or the other.... I can see the Doe images in this.... tenderness that is only caught by moonbeams in dragonfly willow-light. *big hugs for the rafter goddess*
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On Friday, June 3, 2011, pureevil8
(49) wrote:
Very enchanting and so true. To many times fear negates the truth of love. Thanks for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
oh this is lovely. i hate that fear can stop a love from blooming. very whimsical you two :)