Detonation (With King_Crazy_Dave)
By Malice In Wonderland
the sky dilated
as if black had an urgent cause
to cloud hues
out
he raised his voice as to punctuate
the atmosphere's embrace
he took up the space
Lightning flashed across forlorn skies
As if unable to punctuate
His frustration
Like a longing to
be free
The tides cry out in muted symphonies
the raw power
rips skies
the harbinger of crying babies
trembling dogs
but
he remains unshaken
foolishly laughing in the face of his
purpose
the laughter a ruse, his smile a fuse
sizzling down to his
breakdown
Tick Tock.
Tick. Tick. Tick.
His smile, unbroken
Shines, like that of one who truly knows
No. regret.
With just
a bit of desperation.
Of nothing left to lose.
He laughs
again
Because you're only broken,
If they see
concussion
he explodes, a blooming wild set of roots
penetrates the cerebral
soil
the stem of self shoots up
splitting the grim twilight
upright, scintillating colors
brothers, sisters, twisters
swirling
in the dusk a
husk of what once was
disintegrating
[Boom.]
Comments on "Detonation (With King_Crazy_Dave)"
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A former member wrote:
wow!! awesome flow..could really feel the explosion..nice write..thanks for sharing!!
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A former member wrote:
oh If only I could draw this image of a rose blooming and breaking apart the fragments of a sun bleached skull. i would, it's beautiful enough to frame, your words I mean not something most likely done over a thousand times before.
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On Wednesday, April 13, 2011, stryder
(160) wrote:
this certainly exploded in my head..pounding use of internal rhythmic pressure....a brilliant collaboration; some reet proper business!!