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can you find me?
By the broken
my eyes are dead
my hands red
my knuckles massive
my
anger passive
my hate unmatched
my pity unhatched
my head deranged
my ways never changed
all call me strange
but mabey i'm just widely ranged
so can you find me?
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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
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On Thursday, October 20, 2011, With love_Crow
(83)
wrote:
That was amazing. I loved it
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A former member wrote:
sometimes just being found isnt't enough is it? Its still painful...
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A former member wrote:
Very well written. I loved reading this(:
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On Friday, June 17, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Yes, Yes, Yes... Fuck yeah!!! all call me strange but maybe I'm just widely ranged... Hell fuckin yeah, mmmmmm!
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A former member wrote:
Mmm.. wickedly lovely. Anger unsatisfied :) Awesome.
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On Saturday, February 12, 2011, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
only the right ones will....well done.
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On Saturday, February 12, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
hmm your anger is passive, yet your hate is unmatched... paradoxical much?
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A former member wrote:
Take the pole out of ur ass!!!!! it was great!!! i get everybody is intitled to there own opinion but nobody needs ur critisism if its only purpose it to be rude!!!!
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