Twilight
By scarletara
I need you to hold me and pull me back,
After feeling I am going
insane.
I need the calm you have, I lack,
After life's torrential
rain.
I need the quiet strength your loving arms provide,
After the battles are done.
I need the star shine of your heavenly
eyes
After the day's great sun.
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Copyright 2010 scarletara
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A former member wrote:
I'm glad you have someone there to be with.
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2014, scarletara
(58) wrote:
Yeah, well... I wrote that 4 yrs ago. lol ...Thanks, though...
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A former member wrote:
this is beautifully written, very intense and real
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A former member wrote:
What a lovely love song!
Perfect in the form, rhyming and rhythm as well.
Thank you so much for sharing this piece of poetry,
Pavel
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2011, scarletara
(58) wrote:
you're so very welcome, darlin! thank u so much for compliments. much appreciated
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On Monday, January 17, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
To yearn for something that isn't there, painful isn't it, but to find it brings so much comfort. Thank you for sharing =)
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2011, scarletara
(58) wrote:
it is. it does. thank u, gray
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A former member wrote:
Wonderfully written. Hope you have found/have what you need because being alone with no comfort is horrid. Thank you for sharing.
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On Friday, January 14, 2011, scarletara
(58) wrote:
thank you. yes, i have met my soul mate when i didn't even believe in them...
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2010, mvvenkataraman
(13) wrote:
In this way only we need support Some get it, many do not get I am one such poor person But, at last God saved me A nice poetry I sincerely feel Very practical, telling the truth All need some or other support May God bless all poor souls. Thanks, Yours truly, mvvenkataraman
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On Friday, December 31, 2010, scarletara
(58) wrote:
thank u. yes, we all need support. i hope u have people there for u, too, as well as God. Thanks so much! Happy New Year!