Sweet Home Alabama
By Rebel tiGer King
I once met a girl in a dress
From another place and time
She
walked my way roadside
Her eyes held me first
A beautiful smile
and gentle touch
I finished my cigarette and walked with feeling
Like i knew her from before
Like i loved her once already
She
tuned me up six strings
Sweet home alabama
And i was off to
make a melody
One i hoped she loved.
Just like before
I
knew her touch when we made love
Just like before
She tasted
sweeter this time
And i made that tune just like she liked
Sweet
home alabama
But this time...
This time i wasnt enough.
She
said she loved me and she cried
And the pretty girl in the dress
walked right on through taking my melody and strings
wiht her back
to sweet home wherever it was.
I met a girl in a dress once
She
was great.
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Copyright 2010 siGht in toucH
Published on Thursday, September 2, 2010.
Filed under:
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On Saturday, September 4, 2010, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
"I met a girl in a dress once, she was great" - nice! Reality fans away the fantasy... : )
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On Saturday, September 4, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
You got to watch out for the ones in the red dress..they cab get you into some trouble.. Have a hypnotic pull..
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On Thursday, September 2, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
Oh wow.. This is such a hilarious story of a poem..I met a girl and she wad great haha . Liked the tuning six strings up part .. Nicely done
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On Thursday, September 2, 2010, beautifullybroken
(20) wrote:
I read it because of the title. Great poem.