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Dove with Butterfly Wings
By carlosjackal
Dove with butterfly wings
Body prism for
Rainbow flutter
twins
Symmetric poetics
As heaven defined
Such
beauty destroys me
Apart from my smile
Such beauty
Oh, use me
Then lay here a while
Catch solitary breaths
Then cry for a while
Fly, fly asylum
For my heaven
is insanity
And together we are slow suicide
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© 2021 Carl Denyer
Published on Monday, February 23, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Dove with Butterfly Wings"
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A former member wrote:
"Together we are slow suicide", that line really drives this write home for me. This is very well thought out, and it's a real testament of your poetic talent. Queen Reb:).
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On Sunday, December 4, 2016, sIo
(926)
wrote:
Wow the ending just gave me chills this is beautiful
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On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, Livingdeadgirl
(58) wrote:
its very beautiful, well thought and written, thank you for sharing this beauty.
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A former member wrote:
"Such beauty destroys me Apart from my smile"- gorgeous, gorgeous poem..truly stunning.
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A former member wrote:
Sick piece with brilliant imagery my friend. Thank you for sharing. :)
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On Sunday, July 25, 2010, Bulvine
(30) wrote:
The world is a vampire, sent to drain...sorry couldn't resist. I like this!
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On Tuesday, July 27, 2010, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Bullet with Butterfly Wings - Smashing Pumpkins :) Thanks for the bookmark, glad you liked the piece.
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