What The Sin ?

By charliebrown

Down Lady Lay
No Cover The Bed
Lay There Opened
Blue Papered Head

Time Has Drawn
Labored Breath
Her Body Probed
Painless Death ?

Pounding Rhythm
Flawless Soul
The Fight Was Life
Cold Steel Bowl

Guilty Verdict
The Sentence In
Death Not Life
What The Sin ?

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Copyright 2010 charliebrown
Published on Tuesday, July 20, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: nicccceee... write on my friend. :)

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, July 21, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    wow, incredible write... perfect flow... a real pleasure to read... thanks

  • A former member wrote: It feels as though the whole story is not quite told. Is there more?

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