Martyr the Failures (Snuff entry)

By eyeeatthesky

I break his teeth and spit
into his mouth.
I make him suffer
for once
and watch as his god does nothing.
I test his faith with needles in his gums
and knives along his back.
I watch as he screams
bloody murder and curses into the room
and listen as they echo into

I bite his skin and rape him,
I sodomize the beatified
who can't seem to understand
that he doesn't deserve this
that I
Until his big, beautiful heart
has stopped beating.
I kiss his neck
with razors
and never once
cut too deeply.

This is torture
for him
and masturbation
for me.

I am his savior,
his shepherd
with shattered teeth,
guiding him
to beauty
for the first time
in his life.
His hedonistic pedagogue
with sadistic tendencies.

Guiding him,
to Nirvana,
to Eden
so he can forget about
his once perfect smile and his
that leave his chest
like a bag of dirt
only half filled.
I kiss
his lips
tasting his blood
and feeling the needles
against my tongue.
He coughs up bloody phlegm
and cries.

Once more,
I am left without a worthy disciple.

I nail his hands and feet into the floor,
tape a bag over his head and


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Copyright 2010 eyeeatthesky
Published on Friday, June 11, 2010.     Filed under: "Perverse" and "Poetry"
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  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, June 29, 2010, Gray Vision (505)By person wrote:

    "I break his teeth and spit into his mouth" good god man, I'm sure the expression on my face was priceless if I could have seen it myself lol. This piece reaks of savagery, another amazing write yet again. Thank you for sharing =)

  • A former member wrote: Sick!!! :)

  • insideout On Sunday, June 13, 2010, insideout (48)By person wrote:

    I think something maybe wrong with me, I'm thoroughly enjoying these snuff writes. Excellent piece!

  • Rowan On Saturday, June 12, 2010, Rowan (293)By person wrote:

    Very savage and brutal. I like it.

  • A former member wrote: so.... both the speaker of the poem and the victim spoken of, have broken teeth? I'd say that they could be one and the same... was that the effect you were looking for? but it seems like the end excludes that reading....and this is a homoerotic snuff film? hmmmm interesting. very brutal but somehow leading... in death he is saved..... maybe.

  • A former member wrote: Wow, awesome take on the concept of this contest. A frontrunner for sure.---Draven.

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