Soul Sharing Tingles

By carlosjackal


When you brushed past me
I swear we made love
Or was it our souls
Cosying up
In a liquid sliver of a second
Smooth slides of satisfaction
A technicolour swirl
Of a shared moment

I looked back with tingles
Before I realised
Our bodies
Never touched at all

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© 2021 Carl Denyer
Published on Sunday, June 6, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • thewriterinblue On Wednesday, December 13, 2023, thewriterinblue (37)By person wrote:

    love this one :)

  • A former member wrote: I really like how this illustrates how powerful loving emotions can get. I have been truly blessed to feel this at one point in my life, and it really did change me in ways that I cannot articulate. Good job, my friend. Queen Reb:).

  • Rebel tiGer King On Saturday, September 7, 2013, Rebel tiGer King (258)By person wrote:

    Why have I not read this before? What a journey. A soul novice, painting on the canvas of a passing soul. Marvelous delivery. -RTK

  • A former member wrote: lovely as always! ~ hdb.

  • Malcholm Dark On Sunday, June 6, 2010, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    Ah, the attractions... a well written thought here... thanks for sharing

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