Hold On

By Gray Vision

Hold on,
A little longer,
For I'm coming to stop,
Your hunger.

Hold on
A little longer,
Don't you dear fall into,
That slumber.

Hold on
A little longer,
How much more
Can you go on,
I wonder.

Hold on
A little longer,
For I'm almost here,
It's supper.

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Published on Thursday, April 22, 2010. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This piece was inspired by the commercials for starving children in various regions of the world.

Comments on "Hold On"

A former member wrote: Damn, you got me on this one. I love the build up and the way it teases the imagination. Very cool!
On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, Gray Vision (424) wrote:

Thank you very much Duane, I'm glad that this piece lived up to the hype and also that you enjoyed it =)
A former member wrote: this was very, very beautiful. a precious piece...it was very touching...and made me a little bit emotional...thank you for such a wonderful write :) its written in such a genuine and heartfelt manner...its very striking . write on :)!!!!
On Friday, January 14, 2011, Gray Vision (424) wrote:

Thank you so much Ice for your kind words on this peice, I'm glad you enjoyed as much as I did writting it. Thanks again for dropping by =)