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Hold On
By Gray Vision
Hold on,
A little longer,
For I'm coming
to stop,
Your hunger.
Hold on
A little longer,
Don't you dear fall into,
That
slumber.
Hold on
A little longer,
How much more
Can you go on,
I wonder.
Hold on
A little longer,
For
I'm almost here,
It's supper.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Thursday, April 22, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
This piece was inspired by the commercials for starving children in various regions of the world.Comments on "Hold On"
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A former member wrote:
Damn, you got me on this one. I love the build up and the way it teases the imagination. Very cool!
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On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, Gray Vision
(425)
wrote:
Thank you very much Duane, I'm glad that this piece lived up to the hype and also that you enjoyed it =)
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A former member wrote:
this was very, very beautiful. a precious piece...it was very touching...and made me a little bit emotional...thank you for such a wonderful write :) its written in such a genuine and heartfelt manner...its very striking . write on :)!!!!
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On Friday, January 14, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you so much Ice for your kind words on this peice, I'm glad you enjoyed as much as I did writting it. Thanks again for dropping by =)
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