Rock Bottom

By Gray Vision

Mirror mirror on the wall,
What have I done,
I've lost it all.
I've lost everything,
Family and all,
Even down to my friends,
Maddie and Paul. 


Mirror mirror on the wall,
I know I'm not the brightest
Of them all,
Or the nicest
Or the funniest, 
You know this all
But was there anything,
Anything… 
I could have done,
To prevent this all? 


Mirror mirror on the wall,
You don’t have to respond to me,
Not at all,
But if you could
Just saying that’s all,
I would ask,
Was it worth it?
Or more importantly,
Did I deserve it all?

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Monday, April 12, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Feel free to comment or pitch advice, tyvm.
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  • A former member wrote: A 10 fire sure u nailed it. Good write !

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