im.pecable freight trains. on bored

By sIo

smells like winter.
in here.
i can't feel.
what's that shadow.
over there?

did you hear that voice
i can't breathe.

in here
baby speak.

to me.

like roses
i'll pick up your
scent like blood
hounds on a crusade

in the ashes of
this mausoleum
i fret

fallen prose it's still
in the able
i took
the fall

did you mark that?
i lost the map
my toes are frozen and i
smell death

won't you care to

snowing. runs.
and err ands
i feel the shell
of my existance


you told me no.

i inhaled the
meants for


i broke the

so put me

i'm worth

fucking. no.thing.

send me. home.

i'll die better there.


me up

i'll insist you
enjoi yourself


ride me out
like this wave-length
of a whore.

call me out

i'll tell you
that i know knot
where i've

i know knot
where the fuck.
i am.

fuck me like you love

tease me like you hate

test me like i
know everything.

i'll an.sir


but i won't

the snow has fallen

and i'm melting

my toes are cold.
and i can't find
the pirate ship.

but i sure as hell
found satan's locker.
davey jone's
and hidden treasure.

don't make me

this ship

i've not set sale

sense these streets


i've but to sip

on my own highs

to manage rocks

at the bottom of my


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Copyright 2010 Joanna Smith
Published on Thursday, February 25, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

fuck off.
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, January 12, 2021, carlosjackal (2570)By person wrote:

    Knockout punch after knockout punch from start to finish.

  • sIo On Wednesday, December 28, 2016, sIo (941)By person wrote:

    Sincerely I don't know know where I left this poet. She's kamikazed and left the building, I fear for good.

  • Devilish On Thursday, June 30, 2011, Devilish (2746)By person wrote:

    Daaaaaamn! This is hot! Scholar

  • heroineyes On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, heroineyes (113)By person wrote:

    fuck me like you love her. tease me like you hate me. test me like i know everything. i'll an.sir this reminded me of a friend and i loved the ending

  • A former member wrote: I love the end.... so much so, I cant remember the begin'n . like i hit this apex... and I smiled all over the horizen.... and it fell out from under me.. and I saw the top of the world become the middle of the pit... .. and now. now I just walk in circles... *leaves gardenias under dp table*

  • Rebel tiGer King On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Rebel tiGer King (259)By person wrote:

    some intense stuff you got here, chillin and fuckin deep, i'd like to hear this put to music for some reason, good none the less *fucks off* :) -symph-

  • A former member wrote: Fucking brutality in a jar that won't open. Damn girl. Amazing and awesome. Thank you for sharing!! =)

  • A former member wrote: Yikes. Feels like a wrecking ball to the testicles. Fast, powerful, relentless. +tpu+

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