Rags to Wishes

By Rebel tiGer King

Linger
As shadows dance
And watch me toss this rag smile
On broken sidewalks

Shine
Even as the tears of many
Lie beneath your feet
And wish me as your audience

Walk
Up to me
As I can not walk up to you
And grant me one smile
And let it linger
So that I may turn these
Rags to wishes

*cowrite with carlosjackal*

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Copyright 2010 siGht in toucH
Published on Sunday, February 14, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: there are no words. funny, on a site full of them. xoxox

  • A former member wrote: quite lovely

  • A former member wrote: This was truely beautiful. Hope all is well with you Mr. Lovely write. =)

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, February 16, 2010, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    Another classic is written! ;)

  • Phalanx On Monday, February 15, 2010, Phalanx (678)By person wrote:

    This is good and hopeful, I love these kinds of writes, they help keep in mind that anything is possible if you can manage not to shit in your own hat. Good work.

  • lupus tenebrae On Sunday, February 14, 2010, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    Great write, it makes me look forward to better days, no matter how long the wait. I needed that. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: After reading this, I'm left with a calming sense of hope and inspiration; thank you. Scholar


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