Lost, I should have known

By Angelic Darkness

What happened to all our pretty thoughts,  All our pretty schemes?
All our Desires, Wishes and Dreams?

All the Laughs, and all the kisses.
All that my Heart and Body Misses.

Insomnia has come again, my cruel and petty little friend.
Why won't it end. .

Whispering truth and lies in my ears,
Bringing to light my Worst Fears.

Fear, not a good befriend make.
But now, atleast, I know my Fate.

A Mothers, Daughter, her fears and ways,
Pushing past my Happy days.

A seed sown, now bloomed.
I should have seen this path was doomed...

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Copyright 2009 Angelic Darkness
Published on Thursday, November 12, 2009.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This poem had excellent flow and meaning. However, there was one line I did not get "Fear, not a good befriend make" probably just me though. My clumsy hands could not grasp it... I liked your poem all the same :) Thank you.

  • Angelic Darkness On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, Angelic Darkness (27)By person wrote:

    Basically I'm saying that Fear isn't something you should have close all the time. There should be a space between Bed and Friend actually now that I look at it. Hehe. Plus I think I might have skipped some proper Grammar to keep my flow going. >.> ^.^; Thanks for the Comment!

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