stuttering gun fight.
By sIo
copy
me just c.c.copy me
i want to stutter something stout
because
it's so truth
be told like i forgot to
move my pyramids
sweet
tearamids of salt
i fell forgotten filtered thick
and
wandered roads
dividing choice by fault
of error in three point
turns
like air was dust and fog
the drift
vengeful
tyrant i did pray
upon no bench down on my knees
nor with my
hand, my lip, or thigh
as such a battle never falters
for soothe
when victory is ny
i shutter. fuckking
shuddder. a hellhound
crescent
hallowing ball. dancing
just to taunt, the tease
like this chase made breath
of me i fukking udder what
might
come
they know not i strut
the death of me like hip popping
ebony and wood shucking cherry trees
i've the memory of the
earth
and the courage of tuskless elephantry
sir i
dare only dream that you know
who you have torn to feathers
phoenix
phoney phaux fuck
and fall
challenge me. p.p.prove me
wrong rung out and writhe
raw. whisk me away. i swear
i'll
stay.
no ring me awry i swear
this test was never meant
for me
and shove all your answers
keys passwords and rules
up all your gates keepers highbeams
and poles
encrustedÂ
envelopment
benign imaginations
j.j.j.ust let go of my
hand
i've gotten the trigger finger happy
and here on out
i got it covered.
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Comments on "stuttering gun fight. "
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A former member wrote:
i love this. your style is perfect, and you have an excellent vocab as well. reading this was like listening to you speak; i had a distinct idea as to what your voice sounded like, and that was just an incredible experience, as a reader.
well done.
L.
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On Tuesday, October 6, 2009, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
builds slowly to a several striking crescendos & in the end sealed up succinctly - nice piece...
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On Tuesday, October 6, 2009, skully
(43) wrote:
I l.l.Love your nonsense. Makes sense to me anyway
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A former member wrote:
profoundly spoken.i love it!
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A former member wrote:
The stuttering aspect of this pieces lends a very vulnerable/ emotionally strained voice to it. Absorbing work, though you don't falter, poetically, often. Excellent composition. +tpu+