hypothetical hue

By AniDayz



do you burn in the fire of the fiery smoke
enthralled and .thrust.

thrust your self
into that


infinite


space
between


thought and tangibility
spoken word and unconscious . ness

tree limb and sky,
breath and chest


that .place. between
raindrop and sky,
clouds and moon

the trace
silhouette of a star screaming.careening across space
held
in the palms of a hand...

your hand.
my hand.

fingers.

embossing

the vocal structures of personality

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writhing and worming inside the skin you walk

in


in

that perceived space between you . (and this) world...

this world
so whimisical
so unjustified and crawling upon bare.
knees
pulsating within teardrops colured in hues of

outrage.



do i dare cast myself upon the tornado

of a snowflake kissing space
smiling and dancing in the intricate calligraphy of a buttwerflywing
pumping in rhythmic drumming drumming
melodically as the heart against rib cage

cage. in a mirror, staring
into it self



do i dare
cast myself between



that space between . . .






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y e s . . .











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© 2009 AniDayz
Published on Sunday, April 19, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mute Serenade On Friday, November 3, 2017, Mute Serenade (389)By person wrote:

    This is brilliant. I love the pace and movement this piece creates. It takes on a life of it's own as you read the words. Your letters dance.

  • blue On Friday, April 1, 2016, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I can't begin to explain how much I have missed you, Kokoro. Zutto.

  • Tonights Decision On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, Tonights Decision (132)By person wrote:

    in the space.. in between , there is a gap this poem is like looking... down i adore...

  • surething On Wednesday, July 1, 2009, surething (51)By person wrote:

    I feel as though I have breathed this work in and I can't let it out. every image in this work has been projected in my mind and played themselves out as I read through this, it was a confined realm of thought that leads to me new boundaries, few writes can do that, and you consistantly prove that to be the case... simply brlililant work

  • Alanarchy On Sunday, April 19, 2009, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Intensive, and extremely interesting introspective. (woot! alliteration.) "do i dare cast myself upon the tornado of a snowflake kissing space" This is a super killer depth charge. The kind of thought one does only when it's quiet, still and dark. "y e s..." Careful. Here there be monsters. Wonderful.

  • A former member wrote: i like ur style of writing, very hard hitting and interesting.

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, April 19, 2009, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    *stunned*

  • whisperer On Sunday, April 19, 2009, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    wow, bravo, a well done dance down the darkened corridors of your mind and thought

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