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The Raptor and the Rapture
By mysticventures
Hungry eyes
starving
Peer into my soul
Feeding on my fear and excitement
Steaming nostrils
flaring
Sear my throbbing flesh
Devouring the scent of my thrill
Razor claws
dripping
Tear into my heaving chest
To expose my pounding heart
Feast well my lover
On this ravaged body
That I may die in ecstasy
And in bliss
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© 2009 mysticventures
Published on Wednesday, April 15, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2015, Nimue44
(289)
wrote:
Well you turn things upside down with that last two stanzas! This was bloody and beautiful in its dark hungry way.
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A former member wrote:
This reminds me of an old saying of mine: Bask in the ambiance of human existence...or was it the filth of human existence... either way excellent write and I'll be reading on.
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
Fleshy voodoo is what this is. I love it :)~ 669 ~(:
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
I appreciate your comments Alanarchy - and have re-visited this work - i am abit rusty but you may find the ending more equal to the rest of the flow now :)
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Spot on, man. Beautiful work :)
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I'm gonna be honest. I thought this was killer, up until the last two lines. You had such an intense mood going, and it was kind of shattered by how flippant the end was, specifically the word "come". That's my two cents. Thanks for sharing, dude. Welcome back.
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On Wednesday, April 15, 2009, IAmNorge
(38) wrote:
i thought this was good, i am fond of the way you've woven the words together, i will have to read some of your other work since this, good job-Grim
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