Your clothes

By Gideon Lost

Your clothes
Have always looked better
On the floor
Lover
Intimately familiar
With every blemish
Every sag, wrinkle, line
Bulge!
Each and every mark
My favorite mistake
How I love
Who you are
And who I am
With you.

Austerberto R. Palis, Jr.
March 27, 2009; 17:58pm

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© 2009 Austerberto
Published on Friday, March 27, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • CjPsychotic On Friday, March 27, 2009, CjPsychotic (30)By person wrote:

    Simple, sweet, and safficing. Great job

  • Mylissa On Friday, March 27, 2009, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    I like this.

  • A former member wrote: Disturbingly good. Not sure if you're serious or not. Doesn't matter.

  • Gideon Lost On Friday, March 27, 2009, Gideon Lost (137)By person wrote:

    I'm never too serious. what were we talking about?

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