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Still a little drunk
By Dejected_Worth
being better than you
I've dreamed of this
to only wake empty handed
(and still a little drunk)
They painted you a saint
the perfect pillar of Victorian clay
Romanesque and Godlike, framed to
so small a scale
(and still a little drunk)
The chemical smile
hid horrible lies
Tangible sin, atrocity hides
in the glint of blue eyes
human arms bent to mock wings
a taste of fate less hypocrisy
and we have fallen (as if to death)
to chance the slim hopelessness
to wake in the arms of a loving God
wide eyed and oblivious
(and still a little drunk)
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© 2009 SGT James Craven
Comments on "Still a little drunk"
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A former member wrote:
Damn. Eat my platitudes with the others here in.
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On Monday, March 16, 2009, Shortnlethal
(65)
wrote:
Short n Nasty..love your wording, and understanding of the feelings we go thou when we are drunk. Keep up the good work ^^
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On Sunday, March 15, 2009, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
drunken rage at it's natural finest. i'm going to keep reading your thoughts here...
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On Sunday, March 15, 2009, Cherry Bear
(25) wrote:
Beautiful piece of work, Liked a lot. The tittle made me think this was going to be something horrible but something pressed me to read it, the title fits perfectly and its a beautiful write Cherry Bear
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On Sunday, March 15, 2009, darkcoldplace
(6) wrote:
wonderfully written
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