hue

By AniDayz

kites draw smiles
upon my face.
facial features make me smile.
clouds gather in my mind and
blow out
illuminating stars constellating
inside your spine.

and i wonder at the wandering wonders of

everything

tracing lines upon the circular canvas of
intertwining time less ness

rivering

as a balloon
words often travel
through veins of thought and perception
suddenly popping
bursting
upon a tongue nursing a

language

so wordless it's the most
innately understandable

somersaulting
through fields of
memories and projection
sweat and conception
spring's green and desert's purple
purpling in cobalt waves
dripdropping into twinkling

interaction

and it's all interaction.
isn't it
i mean,
what isn't.

but in that interaction
in those interactions

differing colours breathe.
differing depths dive in
and come up
for air.
differing shapes merge and form.

differing malleable same.ness
exposes (it)self

depths of versatility
wavering waves of coalescence
perceptive ability
the exchange of wisdom
falling like raindrops into hands

enhancing.
enriching.
reminding.

a reflection.
recollection.

birth.

of interchangeable depths

embrace.
upon the face
of a mirrorquestionmarking
like thunder

(is it all)
reflection
of
.us.
life it.self
we
our.self

an interchangeable, indistinguishable

reflection

of it all



in the mud.puddle point
of understanding



bare knees and hiccup kisses




maybe we are an ocean.

an ocean of stars and sparkles.


crashing into eachother and tasting

the salt



stinging and

healing


hand in hand heart in heart
(handinheartinhandinheart)


touch.

FEEL


creation of creativity

are we

canvas, medium,
background,
colour,
incentive,
inspiration
integration,
understanding, correspondence
dance,



pulse.





.
.
.



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© 2009 AniDayz
Published on Tuesday, January 6, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • surething On Wednesday, July 1, 2009, surething (51)By person wrote:

    I am a little dissapointed that I haven't read this work sooner. pure bliss to read, taking my senses on a vibrant trip. so full of everything that poetry deserves. you are an inspiration, truly!

  • blue On Monday, January 19, 2009, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    Ya know Kelin, I read these words of you, and I cannot for a moment fathom how you could so easily walk away. I am beginning to question everything, everything. I hope you find a real path in life. Blesed be.

  • A former member wrote: As reader I very much enjoy works that make the mind work. And this definitely puts the mind's eye to task. Expanding, stretching outward, till it snaps back in a loud realization of thought.

  • Lotophagi On Tuesday, January 13, 2009, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    hue.... what a perfect title. It's been so long since I've read poetry, so very long. This was like taking a breath when you think you're in a smog-filled city and it being pure, clean, fresh spring air early in the morning. Satisfying, compelling and though provoking. Thank you.

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, January 7, 2009, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    i can never comment on your work right off, sometimes it takes a number of reads until i can pull myself out of it, from among it... the words always seem to adhere and weave in in an intoxicating way and i never want to miss any of them or their texture...

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