Tom the mail man, nailed the slut

By BlacK_diamond_Bay

Black and white serenity flows freely
With the waves of carrier envelope.
Drawn beyond the reasons of euphoria.
Cats eyes sound the music of the ground on which I stand.

Separate from my body, living in my thoughts
Of how you once lit my fire with your
Caterpillar intuition.

Sink or swim.

Divide the tides and bounce on your rabbits foot.
Its all the luck you need to keep me from
Drawing way outside the lines of your inner slut.

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© 2008 BlacK_diamond_Bay
Published on Monday, June 2, 2008.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • Lady Grinning Soul On Tuesday, June 3, 2008, Lady Grinning Soul (143)By person wrote:

    it was really the title that drew me to this and the last line was my favorite

  • A former member wrote: okay... thats weird. i swear i commented this earlier today... okay well anyways, i love /Drawn beyond the reasons of euphoria/ and the last 3 lines are absolutely perfect :)

  • A former member wrote: hmmm..makes me want to call you Mr.McFeely :)

  • A former member wrote: /Drawing way outside the lines of your inner slut/ loves this line. this piece is great. ^_^

  • Rebel tiGer King On Monday, June 2, 2008, Rebel tiGer King (239)By person wrote:

    i liked this, toolness :D -symph-

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