choking down reality

By denver nitze

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empty.ness eats me

while i sustain its

life

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© 2008 denver nitze
Published on Tuesday, May 6, 2008.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Thursday, December 21, 2017, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    this is fine minimalism. I cannot do it true justice to comment on it.

  • Narcissa On Monday, May 12, 2008, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    Wow...Im speechless.

  • A former member wrote: i keep coming back to read this. nice one.

  • A former member wrote: ...my name. . .. always startles me; but this is dark and dripping complexity. . .life is tricky with its multiple meanings and iconoclastic needfulness. .. . taught and trembling write. +NESS

  • AniDayz On Wednesday, May 7, 2008, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    ...

  • A former member wrote: I wish upon this encroachment the appetite of a snake, may it feed once a month for inspiration purposes only.

  • A former member wrote: damn it to hell for being so hungry.

  • A former member wrote: crushed me into fine dust

  • Sparrow On Tuesday, May 6, 2008, Sparrow (88)By person wrote:

    Crushing.


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