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A Funeral and Birthday Wishes
By GraveFlower
October 26 2007
months ago
yet, still stained into my memory
SAW 4
car ride home
*side swiped*
glass
blood
scared
hospital
it makes you wonder
do angels bleed to?
are their tears still salty warm crystals
do they feel pain
does she still feel the pain she was suffering
when she died
or did she fall in love with the devil at first sight
the human body is a blank canvas
mine
is covered with scars
metal
and a lot of ink soon to come
hers
ink.
torn skin
pail and cold
is she cold at night?
this year
on my birthday...
..ill bring her a blankie and roses..
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On Wednesday, October 31, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
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wrote:
words fail... friendship is a hard thing to find... and then to lose it ...
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On Sunday, October 21, 2012, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
i will visit you this friday dear friend...i miss you dearly. i will bring i a drink for you to celebrate my birthday with me.
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On Saturday, March 15, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
A blanket and roses - beautiful and personal tribute.
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On Thursday, March 13, 2008, Trigger
(70) wrote:
This is quite beautiful. Very heartfelt in a hard hitting passionate prose. Great write. -Trigger
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On Monday, March 10, 2008, Sketso
(435) wrote:
I do not envy the thoughts behind this work, as any loss is scarring, but a tragic loss so much more... Warm wishes and hugs to you, darlin'. Hope ya feel 'em and they do some good.
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On Monday, March 10, 2008, Sketso
(435) wrote:
On a side note too, forgot to say: Thanks for sharing. It's a beginning of healing, and beautifully written as well.
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A former member wrote:
there's not alot more that can be said, just know that the words are true.
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A former member wrote:
This was beautiful.
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
you are really such a beautiful person inside and out. i see so much of the young me in you. i'm really glad you're here at this site and that i could meet such a talented and promising young soul. this poem holds alot of feeling, and i can't stop coming back and looking at it (i suppose its cuz i was supposed to go to my friends funeral today eek) death is a difficult thing to go thru, but we really have to do, what you just did and celebrate life and the memories that we have. if only we could live forever, and maybe we do, who knows. *important part* but the time we have here and the ways that we touch others hearts and lives is what matters. i'm so glad to have met you ms. danni. keep writing and never stop being you. much love your way. ~ta
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
ps. yes doll, angels bleed. my tears are are made of blood. and i bleed for the angels, a tarnished angel every moment of this life... seems sad but it is me and somewhere clouded by darkness i am beautiful and happy too. (it always comes back to yin and yang.) :) thanks for this one really nice work. ~ta
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
you are 'love'. this was so beautiful and heartfelt. very touching. ~tNa
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
Beautiful friend you are
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