Somedays, Somenights, Sometimes, Somethings, Somewhere, Somehow
By Crimsonrose
Somedays are better than others, somedays feel like they were never here
at all. Somedays I wish I could forget, Somedays I wish I could recall.
Somedays I'm okay, Somedays I fake the smile you see. Somedays I miss
someone, Somedays I hate everyone equally. Somedays I laugh, Somedays I
cry, Somedays I lose it all inside. Somedays are good, Somedays are bad.
Somedays I am happy, Somedays I am sad.
Somenights I dream, Somenights I can't sleep at all. Somenights I back
away from the ledge, Somenights I fall. Somenights I scream into my pillow,
Somenights I scream inside my head. Somenights I can't think at all. Somenights
my mind is racing. Somenights I could care less, Somenights I spend all
night thinking.
Sometimes I miss myself, Sometimes I don't know who I am. Sometimes I'm
an asshole, Sometimes I'm a better man. Sometimes time stands still, Sometimes
time flys. Sometimes I forget to remember, Sometimes I just don't know
why. Somethings are hard to remember, Somethings are easy to forget.
Somethings come easy, Somethings play hard to get. Somethings I have to
have. Somethings I can live without. Somethings I believe in, Somethings
I doubt.
Somewhere there is the one. Somewhere there is relief. Somewhere there
are my hopes, Somewhere there are my dreams.
Somehow all is good, Somehow all is well. Somehow this thing has to end,
Somehow so I'll end with I wish you well!
Comments on "Somedays, Somenights, Sometimes, Somethings, Somewhere, Somehow"
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2011, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Great write.. I can really relate.. this fits perfectly to how ive been feeling lately.. Im glad someone could find the right words :)
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On Wednesday, September 17, 2008, Lylani
(116) wrote:
This was fantastic, I loved the repetition it so perfectly captures that feeling of trying to move on, how sometimes it feels okay to move forward and others its crushingly hard and all you want is to live in the memories of that other person
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On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Lawless Fighter
(37) wrote:
Heh. . halfway through the sometimes verse you changed to something but its not in the title >.< . . .just a thought that i had. . it might be beneficial to interchange them if possible, such as: "Some days...,Some nights..., Sometimes..., Somethings..., Somehow..." and then repeat it all. . something like that. . just a thought to make it less repetitive
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A former member wrote:
You are truly a great writer...
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On Saturday, December 29, 2007, italianbella
(185) wrote:
good write:)
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On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Mari
(425) wrote:
It was cute. I could have done with out "some" starting every sentence but I understand the purpose in doing so.