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Diamond In Demand
By carlosjackal
Sometimes you never know
what to say or do
when that amazing woman
is there in front of you
a diamond in demand
most men
couldn’t appreciate
fucking idiots
with only fucking
on their minds
I feel so lucky
just to know she’s mine
that’s why I want
to take the time
to know her well
to give her sex
that’s a pleasure shared
with an intimacy given
space to grow
into something greater
beyond our control
the cosmos colliding
the joining of two souls
as lovers divine
defeating the cold
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© 2021 Carl Denyer
Published on Friday, November 16, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Diamond In Demand"
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A former member wrote:
I can say that she is a truly lucky lady. I know this kind of love, and I feel so complete with it in my life. It's nice to see this kind of love depicted in poetry. Queen Reb:).
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A former member wrote:
perfect, I feel the same brosiff!!
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful, Carlos. Someday I hope to find this myself :) an idea I've had glimpses of before..
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On Monday, November 19, 2007, What Limes
(64)
wrote:
nice. I like the idea of a diamond in demand... keep it up!
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A former member wrote:
diamond lady for a diamond geezer...well played carlos sir.
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On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
I need to get me one of those cosmic space heaters too :P
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On Friday, November 16, 2007, Niemand
(361) wrote:
Beautiful write, lucky lady. You're BOTH Diamonds! 'Here's to the two diamonds! So loving and true, here's to the two diamonds, best of love and wishes from Airi to you'-Airi
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On Saturday, November 17, 2007, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Muchas Gracias, Airi =) -Carl
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On Friday, November 16, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
That's how REAL pimps roll. *spins cane*
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On Friday, November 16, 2007, Niemand
(361) wrote:
*nods* *pulls out and pimp hat and shrugs on pimp coat*
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On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Now..you know you need a gold tooth to be an official pimp ;P *smacks both Mikey and Airi with purple fur lined diamond studded clutch.
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On Friday, November 16, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
oh my goodness this was so beautiful so amazingly put. Lucky woman...and Lucky man. Perfect...LIKEY LOTTIE hehehe
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On Friday, November 16, 2007, Taunting The Reaper
(178) wrote:
Flavorful and crisp, an enchanting read, I lapped it up quite greedily!
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