childhood curse...

By GraveFlower

as i close my eyes

i feel my veins of childhood
break into old memories

my bloodstream transforms into flowering dreams

-------i swallow my mistakes

holding them from the world

remorse in such a way from my past

yet,

knowing i can learn from the very burden
that crushes my soul
.
.
.
im lifeless
.
the possibility of care

is imposible
.
.
absence of pain
.
.
love
-
devotion

my veins collapsing

blood whispers through my body

singing its own death chand





sweeping reality away

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© 2007 stapled_lips
Published on Friday, October 19, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Star On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, Star (1013)By person wrote:

    damn danni this is deep.. wow.. thanks (:

  • Little_Zombie On Tuesday, March 13, 2012, Little_Zombie (38)By person wrote:

    Damn this is a great poem wonderful I have to say.

  • A former member wrote: damn. that was deep .. pain seems to be life, right? never to escape it. this was beautiful. congratulations on poem of the day!

  • Adam On Sunday, May 16, 2010, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    To learn from your past, your mistakes, and most of all your old pain is the best that we can do. Many people here at DP can relate to a poem like this. Scholar

  • Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 On Thursday, January 28, 2010, Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 (165)By person wrote:

    So deep and reeling! You generate your own gravitational pulse! Inspiring!

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, October 23, 2007, Bella Butchery (729)By person wrote:

    i think i can see your writing evolving into maturity, this would do good as lyrics (though maybe not intended) to some good heavy music. bravo :D

  • Trigger On Monday, October 22, 2007, Trigger (75)By person wrote:

    I echo veingo, also, a very interesting portreyal of such a subject. Very well done. I am sorry for whatever inspired it.

  • veingo On Saturday, October 20, 2007, veingo (538)By person wrote:

    Learning from one's self. Is one of the smartest things we can do. ^V^

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