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childhood curse...
By GraveFlower
as i close my eyes
i feel my veins of childhood
break into old memories
my bloodstream transforms into flowering dreams
-------i swallow my mistakes
holding them from the world
remorse in such a way from my past
yet,
knowing i can learn from the very burden
that crushes my soul
.
.
.
im lifeless
.
the possibility of care
is imposible
.
.
absence of pain
.
.
love
-
devotion
my veins collapsing
blood whispers through my body
singing its own death chand
sweeping reality away
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© 2007 stapled_lips
Published on Friday, October 19, 2007.
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On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, Star
(919)
wrote:
damn danni this is deep.. wow.. thanks (:
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2012, Little_Zombie
(33) wrote:
Damn this is a great poem wonderful I have to say.
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A former member wrote:
damn. that was deep .. pain seems to be life, right? never to escape it. this was beautiful. congratulations on poem of the day!
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On Sunday, May 16, 2010, Adam
(245) wrote:
To learn from your past, your mistakes, and most of all your old pain is the best that we can do. Many people here at DP can relate to a poem like this.
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A former member wrote:
So deep and reeling! You generate your own gravitational pulse! Inspiring!
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On Tuesday, October 23, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
i think i can see your writing evolving into maturity, this would do good as lyrics (though maybe not intended) to some good heavy music. bravo :D
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On Monday, October 22, 2007, Trigger
(70) wrote:
I echo veingo, also, a very interesting portreyal of such a subject. Very well done. I am sorry for whatever inspired it.
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On Saturday, October 20, 2007, veingo
(533) wrote:
Learning from one's self. Is one of the smartest things we can do. ^V^
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