childhood curse...

By GraveFlower

as i close my eyes

i feel my veins of childhood
break into old memories

my bloodstream transforms into flowering dreams

-------i swallow my mistakes

holding them from the world

remorse in such a way from my past


knowing i can learn from the very burden
that crushes my soul
im lifeless
the possibility of care

is imposible
absence of pain

my veins collapsing

blood whispers through my body

singing its own death chand

sweeping reality away

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© 2007 stapled_lips
Published on Friday, October 19, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Star On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, Star (1013)By person wrote:

    damn danni this is deep.. wow.. thanks (:

  • Little_Zombie On Tuesday, March 13, 2012, Little_Zombie (38)By person wrote:

    Damn this is a great poem wonderful I have to say.

  • A former member wrote: damn. that was deep .. pain seems to be life, right? never to escape it. this was beautiful. congratulations on poem of the day!

  • Adam On Sunday, May 16, 2010, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    To learn from your past, your mistakes, and most of all your old pain is the best that we can do. Many people here at DP can relate to a poem like this. Scholar

  • Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 On Thursday, January 28, 2010, Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 (165)By person wrote:

    So deep and reeling! You generate your own gravitational pulse! Inspiring!

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, October 23, 2007, Bella Butchery (729)By person wrote:

    i think i can see your writing evolving into maturity, this would do good as lyrics (though maybe not intended) to some good heavy music. bravo :D

  • Trigger On Monday, October 22, 2007, Trigger (75)By person wrote:

    I echo veingo, also, a very interesting portreyal of such a subject. Very well done. I am sorry for whatever inspired it.

  • veingo On Saturday, October 20, 2007, veingo (538)By person wrote:

    Learning from one's self. Is one of the smartest things we can do. ^V^

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