In touch(with the rain)
By Tania
The words seemed to fall from the sky
that day.
That day when I tried to
understand her.
Washed out in the plain rain
that fell every so often..
and she felt it..
..some days..
as it gathered at her feet..
in wait
for some sort of recognition..
.. Those tiny pools of lonesome tears..
..wallowing in their own lonesome existence..
Sodden..
Sopping..
the water always seemed to wet through her shoes too quickly..
..some days..
..she could only sit
and stare..
wishy..
washy..
and wonder why
she felt so immersed..
so soaked up in the rain..
she loved this place.
so close..
so distant..
she loved the rain.
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© 2007 Tania
Published on Friday, July 27, 2007.
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A former member wrote:
like holding out your heart, waiting for it to be cleansed.....exquisite.
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On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(93) wrote:
Love it.And i also love the rain.
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On Saturday, July 28, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
Thank you people.. you are all too kind *blows kisses* :D
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A former member wrote:
Very beautiful :)
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On Friday, July 27, 2007, prettydisgrace
(93) wrote:
you are as beautiful as the rain, i loved this tania :)
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On Friday, July 27, 2007, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
this had a gentle melancholy, dreamlike...lovely... well done