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Nothing
By Disassembly Boy
long hot nights
and bright red screams.
as flesh met metal;
my skin against the wall,
I retracted back my arms
and now I'm stuck here
pulling pieces
of this vacuity
back into me...
what seems so empty,
so meaningless
stays in feelings forever
trapped inside of me;
like a dream inside a dream.
oh baby, this nothing
is all I need.
(something strange I wrote)
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© 2007 Disassembly Boy
Published on Thursday, June 14, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(593)
wrote:
Strange or not, I thought it was great! - 10:43
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On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, italianbella
(185) wrote:
that was extreme great write:)
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
"like a dream inside a dream." I always twist within your words..love this.
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On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Very intense with quick graphic imagery...the lack of being able to feel saving one from horror? Yet somehow haunts, but makes one whole, but implies more than one nothing. Twisted. I like ;)
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A former member wrote:
I hear ya. Good point at the end
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On Saturday, June 16, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
Strange? Hardly. This was so compelling. I loved it. =)
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On Friday, June 15, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
*runs her fingers through your new hairdo*..sigh..
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On Thursday, June 14, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
"Oh baby, this nothing is all I need" :D
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A former member wrote:
"what seems so empty, so meaningless stays in feelings forever" yes...because those things that shouldn't mean anything when said or done...often fill a crater in a chest, or crumble the heart's strongest concrete walls. ~*Beth*~
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On Thursday, June 14, 2007, elisa
(1616) wrote:
Nothing -my second fav word........ Nothing is a vast mistaken Something.... perhaps... the perfect cause of justified reason..... absent of argumentative logic..... very well said.
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On Thursday, June 14, 2007, Disassembly Boy
(61) wrote:
ooh, I really liked that.. "Nothing is a vast mistaken something" RaWr! thank you for your great comment. :) glad to see it made sense.
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