Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight

By Bella Butchery

I can see you hardly miss me
As much as I miss you
You ruined everything
She walks with an axe in hand tonight
My words missed your heart
And went too deep
I thought you might have died



Desperate lung torn collision
She walks with an axe in hand tonight

Weight of the blade
Screaming pavment pursuit
relentless bloody
matted hair, dirt smirk
....The heart severer....


Cleave


Touchtone memories
Suspended in dive bars
For a condescending audience
Both of us will never leave this place alive


….a portrait …
Maybe an ink stained something….


Sit amongst the crows
A skeleton white wash
In the warmth
Of dull flickered lights
“lets get fucked up”
And chase dreams across
Flat-lined cynicism
About how we should have made it
Or change the beat/tempo

The one that got away

Mix / loop


This world doesnt seem real
This world doesnt seem real

An enraged sense of passion
Broke a million sunset memories


She walks with axe in hand tonight


Capillary stained dress
Whiskey lipped induced trance
And in this...
Awake for the first time
Since the last time
Your analogies seemed trite
She walks with an axe in hand tonight
My blank stare seems feeble
And will never halt your stride

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© 2007 Bella Butchery
Published on Tuesday, June 12, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • slow.burn.star On Monday, April 20, 2009, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    The Kerry House. ~ Still a great one.

  • A former member wrote: "And in this.../ Awake for the first time/ Since the last time" I'm not quite sure why, but those have to be my favourite lines. The entire write is beautifully done with great imagery. the betrayal must have been dreadful. --Kaosu

  • A former member wrote: i love all the imagery; 'Capillary stained dress, Whiskey lipped induced trance' keep writing x

  • A former member wrote: "Flat-lined cynicism" Dude, fuckin 10. Great work, man.

  • Mylissa On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    Yes I love, love and love. What stories you can tell with the twirl of your tongue.

  • Tania On Friday, June 15, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    ..loved this especially the first stanza.. and to echo everyone else - superb

  • capt_funguy On Friday, June 15, 2007, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    you speak parts that speak wholes .. like instant analogies you never heard, yet understand. some of them simply classic ..(dirt smirk) - crazeworld huntress spilled out in shorthand ..

  • capt_funguy On Friday, June 15, 2007, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    dug this completely ... so fun to read ... funguy

  • A former member wrote: i like! for some reason it reminded me of slipknots video for vermillion

  • unspeakable truth On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, unspeakable truth (100)By person wrote:

    I have no words here, but this is dancing in my head. I read it 3 times tonight, keep being drawn back....still with my breath taken away. Scholar

  • Tonights Decision On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Tonights Decision (137)By person wrote:

    truly your poem has the weight of the blade.... "She walks with an axe in hand tonight" that line realy stuck to me.. "And chase dreams across Flat-lined cynicism " i know how hard this is...in awe

  • Tonights Decision On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Tonights Decision (137)By person wrote:

    is i. I always imagine different kind of music in backround when reading your writes, maybe its just in my head....

  • Tonights Decision On Sunday, June 17, 2007, Tonights Decision (137)By person wrote:

    This might seem weird but in my head Cedric Bixler-Zavala sings the line "She walks with an axe in hand tonight" and it fills my mind..

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    There were lines in this that took new twists I wasn't expecting, bending my brain beautifully to their images wrought so fantastically by you. -Carl

  • A former member wrote: I always love reading your writes. Bravo once again.

  • A former member wrote: .. i cant find words lately. but you are exquisite.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Oh in that case I see no reason why not to praise this write.. Good one Cloud Mix/Loop's off

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Does an axe have a blade ? *Runs off*

  • openureyes On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, openureyes (56)By person wrote:

    Amazing, your mix of emotions paint a vivid picture. Awesome ;) ~Robyn

  • purr_verse On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    Is this a repost/rework? The repeat line/title sticks in my head; I've loved it before and I love it now. Awesomely effective.

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    yes, its a rework :) it just was not perfect in my own mind.... guess im kinda chaotic but i feel like its complete now with some added structure. thanks ink tounge girl :D

  • LadyMalice On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, LadyMalice (18)By person wrote:

    Very interesting. I love it. ^_^

  • Moonflower On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    damn that is fucking amazing.

  • GraveFlower On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, GraveFlower (249)By person wrote:

    wow........its awesome to hear a new write from the genious.....damn, ......good write,........keep writing ~*D*~

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