A transparent roadkill charming it's way to my bed

By Dancing_Monkey

Campsite panorama, our endless strain,
Favorite ringtones downspin vigorously
Realisation repeat distraction revealing exaggerated prime
- bloom melodrama
Mesmeric this silent spell; A plastic lure
Collectable item not to be traded [Driftwood]
Secretly clawed away in umbral indulgance
I hug myself in closure

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© 2007 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Thursday, May 17, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Lipstick Factor On Friday, May 30, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    I'm not entirely sure I "get" it but I am entirely sure I like it.

  • stormtalk On Sunday, June 24, 2007, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    bananamanstrikesagain

  • urbanhumility On Monday, June 18, 2007, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    articulate.......in direction and feeling...........well done

  • sIo On Saturday, June 16, 2007, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    the part about driftwood and hugging yourself in closure...i love the closure line thats the best. the rest is jumbled but makes for a very nice thing to ATTEMPT to visualize.

  • blue On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    I.. umm. I dont get it. o.O)) oop. ~b

  • Solace On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Favourite monotony - explosion convulsions and mania - beyond human, far beyond distraction (victimless myopathy) more real than reality - stick in hand, beach combing phantasia to a degree of fallacy...

  • Solace On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Favourite ringtone is silence, the silent spell of silence itelf - contemplate contemplation by the river and float on...some things are too important to have a price...this is fantastic

  • A former member wrote: *feeds the monkey a banana* excellent!~Meg

  • verablue On Thursday, May 17, 2007, verablue (111)By person wrote:

    the title sucked me in right away. brilliant word choice.

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, May 17, 2007, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Bloody magnificent!! If I had room on my account this would be an instant fave. This rocks like a raging bitch on heat with clawhammer. Fuckin' nice! -Carl

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Utterly crushing.

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    this work demands comments.. so here is my one comment. life can be a series of stepping stones, look forward and make sure one of them is not a turtle, because it doesnt matter if you fall, just dont hurt the turtle *wind kick*

  • Anth On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    i can only describe this poem as an implosion, a singularity of words condensed so tightly from a million thoughts into something so neat, its after youve read this that it explodes.

  • Anth On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    an embrace so close that it is a star folding into itself. theres almost anger in this, in its quiet intensity, and yet a feeling of utter randomness, its all so much juxtaposition that i feel i either cannot work this poem out, or know it so intimately,

  • Anth On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    it was like i was sitting on a train at night at the bck watching a group of people at the other end, thoughts without words, this poem captures everything and nothing in that most sublime way

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