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fuck your disease.
By i tremble
you words
are laden with
cancerous undertones.
the rattle of
uncertainty lingers
upon your
vile breath
as you
showcase your
disease behind
glass eyes.
just so
you know,
your farewell
speech has
no great,
life-alternating
effect on
me.
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© 2007 jodeanna franks
Published on Tuesday, May 15, 2007.
Filed under:
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On Saturday, February 2, 2008, Syringe
(51)
wrote:
i like it. very succint..maliciously honest
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, unspeakable truth
(100) wrote:
I like this, direct, to the point. Cold, not sure. Might have to think on that.
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A former member wrote:
Very cold indeed, but you said what you needed to say
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A former member wrote:
whoop...that was to the point..nice.
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A former member wrote:
This was nice, well nicley written but the poem it's self was very cold.:)
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
not very poetic, but the message is clear I guess. ~b
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
hah. I loved this. such a slap to the face. you're quite the poet.
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
gha!!!!!!! i asked and i received! doesnt i just urk you, the whole fall out of whatever? this stirkes me as strong, and the obviously blunt tone made me think of a pivited feet in the dirt, a strong stance...
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, The Zebra Warrior
(1521) wrote:
man you ramble!!
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
what can i say? im a ramblin man, magic man :)
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
revision fist line *it just urk you*
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
maybe stabbing a snake? take the pieces you want from him/her and leave the rest, but dont forget to learn, so in that respect, i hope there will be some effect. things will get better kiddo, life is full of curve balls.
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