Too Many (To Follow)

By A_Puppet_Show


Sails upon silent water,
I watch you play below;
But if I raised my head,
my ocean is dead, and -
all my stars are named!

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© 2007 Blinded_Tiger
Published on Monday, May 14, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Solace On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Freakishly fantastic, this is an awesome epitaph to be seriously considered - its one of those rare times I can hear and see and feel the words - I cannot say enough for this, its your best when you do this...

  • Solace On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    I think I might be looking down into the water and missing all the stars...fathomless depths...

  • Solace On Monday, March 17, 2008, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Still my favourite of yours, outside of the obvious Nadir bounds. Theres something about it that eats at me, that just sticks and won't let go. Miss you man, wish i had of been rich enough to see you in Europe.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Saturday, June 28, 2008, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Tell me the next time you are near Denmark. I would just drink up my cash anyway, or spend it on going to koncerts ;)

  • nur hidayah On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, nur hidayah (116)By person wrote:

    There's too many (to follow) in such a concise piece. Delight delight delight then "my ocean is dead, and- all my stars are named" Depressing!

  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    short, sweet, well done

  • Mari On Monday, May 14, 2007, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    liked

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