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A dying embrace...
By Spiritus_Frumenti
The night is weeping
and the stars have burned away
Now that I feel lonelier
than I have ever been
So sombre is my emptiness
filling the world with silence
Breathing only through sobs
When in the midst of all this suffering
all I want to do is love
So solemn is my grief
Turning the wind into whispers
The oceans into dreams
As I pray to the sky
the most impossible things
So deeply I mourn
That there is no place
distant enough I could ever be
than right here
Nothing more tender than those moments
where life ends in my mind
Drawing infinity out of an instance
Burying the heavens with me
if I had a chance...
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© 2007 Spiritus_Frumenti
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A former member wrote:
You should be proud of this.
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On Monday, May 21, 2007, urbanhumility
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wrote:
despair has called your name........she has charmed your words......with deep sadness...............beautiful...........as always.................urban
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A former member wrote:
"s I pray to the sky
the most impossible things" This was filled with such raw emotion. This ending was great. I really enjoyed this.
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A former member wrote:
i have always fallen in syncopated step with your soft haunted themes; the whispered idea of loss, want, and somehow that there is faith, of words, needed, so desperately.something real, meaningful, deeper~ pulsing. always in your 'voice'..amazing. ness
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On Friday, May 11, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
i have read you a couple times since joining... i feel conected to your pieces, maybe its because your lingo is somewhat parrallel. reminds me of a swimming dream... oceanic, ambient, somewhat lost, a very Duresc style that i adore. this is amazing.
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