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Mistake
By Rebel_Angel
So this is what I've been waiting for,
To be hurt by someone else,
I thought you would be different,
Thought you actually liked me,
Comes to find out it was all a mistake,
Was it my fault?
How was I to know what to do,
Everything is just so new to me,
I thought you would understand,
I guess you don't understand at all,
You want to be just friends,
But I don't know if I can,
I need someone to be there for me,
Someone to lean on,
I'm sure you feel bad,
But I guarantee I feel a lot worse,
To be lead on then dropped,
How the hell does that work?
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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Sunday, April 20, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
to find love is hard. but to know u can put ur feelings down on paper is better than taking it out on ur self like i do. its not an easy thing to do. good write.
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
I can relate to that - I like the honest exploration of your emotions in this one without the rhyme scheme, it allowed you to flow on with your honesty. Good one! Ciao, T/S
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
gee i wonder who this could be about...;) great write!
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On Friday, July 18, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
your words penetrate my soul..... lately ive been in search of someone who can understand me, i just dumped sum1 very close to me and i know that she prolly feels wrose then me... nicely written *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger
(30) wrote:
nae that one isnt your fault. After all i was the one who introduced you. Im sorry i didnt think he was that way. Nice write
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
i too didn't know my friend and sorries it took so long for me to coment please no blam self
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A former member wrote:
great poem!!! i like alot im going threw it atm too...but wingless im a guy and its a girl thats doin this to me!
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A former member wrote:
Great write!! You got the feeling perfect!!
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On Friday, May 9, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
yes you did, dear. you captured it magnificently ...damned boys
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On Sunday, April 20, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
damn,great job it describes what im going through right now, thanks for sharing
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A former member wrote:
been down that road, tasted that frustration does suck... but it was a girl that cut out and plastic bagged my heart for me...
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