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A Simple Hello
By unspeakable truth
As I breath in this day, gratefully
I exhale soft whispers
Hoping the breeze picks them up
Deposits them at your doorstep
So you can open the door and trip over them
Heading out for a smoke
In a myriad of some choice words
To smile and realize, I got you
My mind wandering, missing you
The reasons spanned through so much
Yet it is what free means
( you understand that, don’t you )
You had this key that helped to open
And I am not sure why
I want to scream from atop the mountain
As the glaring sunshine burns my eyes
I hate you
With a twinkling like the stars you see as diamond bits each night
I love you
I could share, but I honestly have nothing really to say
Could ask, but the questions all faded as time moved
But I think what this is mostly is that I need to show
What you had a hand in helping to create
Thankful wrapped hugs
For providing the clean sheets of paper
I use as wings to fly
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© 2007 unspeakable truth
Published on Tuesday, May 8, 2007.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, July 15, 2014, Lux
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wrote:
This is spectacular, darling. Powerful and insanely wistful at the same time. Reminds me of how I blow a kiss every night in the direction of Home, hoping someone grabs them up and holds them tight, remembering me and missing me.
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On Friday, August 24, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
loved the first stanza in particular.. very nice.
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On Monday, August 13, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
LOVE it 100%. You are such an inspiring writer...perfect in all ways.
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On Monday, August 13, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
It's remarkable this doesn't have more comments. This was an amazing piece of work. I will have to read more of your writes. =)
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A former member wrote:
This was so powerful. I'm azamed at how much this struck me. Excellent ending
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