Kiss V

By Thorn

[Based on the painting "Kiss V" by Roy Lichtenstein]

An American embrace
A picture-perfect couple
In the moment
In love
In tears

Blonde hair
Red lips
Flawless features
Two beautiful people
Still unsatisfied

Th'unsung blessings we share
The tears fall through the air
Gave proof through the night
That our flag was still there

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© 2007 Thorn
Published on Thursday, April 12, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • PoeticHellion On Thursday, April 26, 2007, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    Wow. That was amazing.

  • capt_funguy On Friday, April 13, 2007, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    exceptional little piece here... very pleasant turn for an ending... honest simple poetic bullseye ... cool man...funguy

  • capt_funguy On Friday, April 13, 2007, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    that was quick ... thanks man

  • Forgotten Angel On Thursday, April 12, 2007, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    surprised at the ending. very nice. wheres the other 30? -Kel

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, April 12, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Awesome. The end kicked my ass.

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