she spoke sapphire

By Six-Out

she spoke sapphire




she spoke sapphire to me.
like the tear stain.d granite. when she'd
whisper. softly. of the skies
when the stars forgot to sing.

and she's kissing heartache with lips
more royal than the crown of thorns she placed.
upon herself. when the rain was falling like ashes
that I tipped from my nicotine-laced poetry. when we'd burn
notebooks like they were pornographic.
in indigo light shades. the sun is burning blue.

and she'd bleed turquoise. as her half-hearted
stucco-esqe. broken dreams/ would bend
to the will of the words she spoke like crayons on a white wall.
spraying her name, like some form of
turquoise tagging.

then. she's breaking barbells on doors.
knocking over lampshades- and the walls are bleeding azure.
while her lips are lingering over lightposts.
the neon lights- she calls home. they're beckoning.
as I watch her stumble.


we crumble as one- finish in pieces of cobalt ashes.
and if i could speak, I'd tell her
that the beauty is in the build-up. because
the breakdown.

is too tiresome. to matter.

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© 2007 Jon Rodgers
Published on Tuesday, April 10, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: The colour of emotion is hard to paint especially only using letters but I feel the passion in this rainbow of word, this spectrum of human flesh meeting real blood that flows in each of our veins.

  • italianbella On Saturday, December 22, 2007, italianbella (185)By person wrote:

    youre beautiful words and thoughts take me to new heights you are an amazing writer.

  • A former member wrote: Incredible. I love the mix of otherworldly imagery and modern elements. She speaks, and I listen. No matter the color.

  • A former member wrote: I'm liking this... it's been far too long since I checked your page, glad I found this waiting for me!

  • Anth On Saturday, May 19, 2007, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    I love most the ending to this. from the neon lights she calls home. such atmosphere in few verses.it builds up and then utterly crashes down both bleak and beautiful. I love the dramaticness. the over emphasis of all the small details. like what rain doe

  • LiP Stiches On Monday, May 7, 2007, LiP Stiches (42)By person wrote:

    illuminating imagery that digs deep with in me......truly awesome

  • PoeticHellion On Sunday, April 29, 2007, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    These get so much better every time I read them

  • Savannah On Friday, April 27, 2007, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    Jon, dear, I love love love this. Stabbed me right in the heart.

  • asphyxia On Thursday, April 19, 2007, asphyxia (58)By person wrote:

    "and she's kissing heartache with lips more royal than the crown of thorns she placed. upon herself." beautiful.

  • Army Barbie On Sunday, April 15, 2007, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    Jon...you always leave me breathless.

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, April 11, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    All I can do is echo tania. This is bottled beauty. Tastes like Disarono, but hits you harder than 151. Saphire is one of my favorite words.

  • Tania On Wednesday, April 11, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    This was stunning to the core. i loved this... flawlessly beautiful.

  • Guillotine On Wednesday, April 11, 2007, Guillotine (172)By person wrote:

    particularly enjoyed the flawless use of punctuation, breathtaking content with a rythym that added whatever could be fitted into the sides of thid perfection.

  • sweetambrosia On Wednesday, April 11, 2007, sweetambrosia (80)By person wrote:

    As always I am awed by your words, your descriptions, the way you see things, I could quote a number of lines that were sheer perfection, but I have not the space. Beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: i liked this alot. ~ saddened.


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